The Fish swimming around.

Persuasive writing

 Could you imagine seeing over 3.million pieces of rubbish in our oceans? Would’nt that feel like swimming in the dump?

Our ocean is being ruined and we need to do something about it.

Not only is the pollution affecting our oceans, overfishing is also causing our oceans to empty out, along with the negative effects of global warming. 

1.  Global warming.

First of all greenhouse gases trap more energy from the sun,the oceans are absorbing more heat sooo” that means the sea surface temperatures are rising and the sea levels change as the Ocean can easily kill Sealife.

2.  Polluting

Ok so you know untreated sewage is finding its way to our ocean?Each year 1.2 trillion gallons of untreated sewage is dumped into the water that maybe could have tiny parts of plastic that could most probably kill our sea life.

3.  Fishing Proplems

Last but not least, people say catching fish is’nt bad for the ocean but I know that people are way overfishing.It is estimated that over a trillion fish are caught each year from the moana.

          Conclusion

Do you think if we stop all of these problems in the ocean we would have a better ocean for us to do all sorts of things?

Because we are using our oceans for many things.

Production

 Reflection about the production.

This year we did a production about Tiddler the storytelling fish.

I like the production because I was the octopus and I was one of the main characters.

I felt excited because I didn’t feel scared at all and because I had already done something like that two years ago but this production was way better.

I really love going up on stage and preforming

I really wanted to achieve my goal that I did at the start of which was to be Tu maia and I feel like I made it.

My favorite part of the production was when I put my costume on for the first time, I feel like next they should make a production a bit longer.

Mairangi bay

What makes a good Blog

I feel like a good blog needs.....

• You need a good audience/reader

• Good Title for the reader to hook them in and get the reader's attention.

• Put the main part in the first paragraph to interest people.

• You use I for first person, we for second person and so on.

• Interesting language and good information about your topic.

• The style of writing needs to be friendly and kind.

• Put the details in the following paragraph so the reader can understand what you're saying.

• Images that suit what you're writing and connect up to your blog that the reader would like.

• Describing things that you have done in the past and reflecting on your other blogs.

• Hopefully you get good feedback at the end.

Reflection

My reflection on my speech.

The topic of my speech.

The topic of my speech was should we use digital devices instead of pen and paper.

How Persontasion went.

I really liked my speech because I didn’t want to waste my time writing a speech and don’t saying it right.

I felt butterflies in my stomach at the start of my speech.

Planning.

My planning went really well and I like what I write about.

Because It was kinda difficult to research about my topic though.

Editing.

Editing at the end was really hard cause I didn’t know what I was looking for cause it looked all good until the printing time there was a big mistake.

My speech

My Goal

      

 Ko toku whainga ako for this Term Is to be Tu maia so that means to be brave because we are doing a production be confident on stage so not being shy.

 The production is about a little fish telling taddles.

Cause I want to be Tu Maia.