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Thursday, July 1, 2021

Persuasive writing

 Could you imagine seeing over 3.million pieces of rubbish in our oceans? Would’nt that feel like swimming in the dump?

Our ocean is being ruined and we need to do something about it.

Not only is the pollution affecting our oceans, overfishing is also causing our oceans to empty out, along with the negative effects of global warming. 


  1.  Global warming.

First of all greenhouse gases trap more energy from the sun,the oceans are absorbing more heat sooo” that means the sea surface temperatures are rising and the sea levels change as the Ocean can easily kill Sealife.



  1.  Polluting

Ok so you know untreated sewage is finding its way to our ocean?Each year 1.2 trillion gallons of untreated sewage is dumped into the water that maybe could have tiny parts of plastic that could most probably kill our sea life.



  1.  Fishing Proplems

Last but not least, people say catching fish is’nt bad for the ocean but I know that people are way overfishing.It is estimated that over a trillion fish are caught each year from the moana.


          Conclusion

Do you think if we stop all of these problems in the ocean we would have a better ocean for us to do all sorts of things?

Because we are using our oceans for many things.



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